I can understand why you would be worried about writing that part in the right tone, but honestly, you didn't have anything to be anxious about! That was perfect, just like you said, pure and loving rather than lustful. Absolutely, that makes perfect sense. God, you seem to understand the nature of their relationship soooo well. It's what makes these reviews and our conversations so rich and that's why I value your input so highly.
You're welcome!! I can imagine, but they came out really, really well. Oh, well, endings are the last things people read so they set the tone for how people are going to feel about it - the feeling that they're going to come away with. So, yeah, they are important. You nailed it. :)
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Date: 2009-01-14 12:39 am (UTC)I can understand why you would be worried about writing that part in the right tone, but honestly, you didn't have anything to be anxious about! That was perfect, just like you said, pure and loving rather than lustful. Absolutely, that makes perfect sense. God, you seem to understand the nature of their relationship soooo well. It's what makes these reviews and our conversations so rich and that's why I value your input so highly.
You're welcome!! I can imagine, but they came out really, really well. Oh, well, endings are the last things people read so they set the tone for how people are going to feel about it - the feeling that they're going to come away with. So, yeah, they are important. You nailed it. :)
You're welcome!! <3